The two maps below show an Island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. 

Read the sample IELTS Writing Task 1 on the topic: The two maps below show an Island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. 

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The two maps below show an Island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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Band Score: 5.0 Bands

This map had an average development they created a lot of construction, so the tourists can come and visite that place they worked on there map that has 100 meters they had build some restaurants some accommodations and they have also the sea and the beach which is perfect for visitors in summer they managed to have a lot of activities and places that are obligatory they used all of available places to creat that and we can tell that the second map is better and will get more visitors that the first one because she contains every thing that a visitor is needing or he is looking for they had a mixe between construction and the nature which is super great To keep the balence of nature

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• Written by an IELTS Student

Band Score Analysis (5.0):

• There is no overview.
• The information is not organised using separate paragraphs or following the wrong structure.
• The grammar mistakes are prevalent in the whole response.
• No linking words used.
• Spelling mistakes.
• Irrelevant information or personal opinion is added.

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